Drop a VERSE!!!!!!! FREESTYLE 16 BARS LETS GO!!!!!

[Haspy]

You know whats the deal. Drop a freestyle verse about anything. It has to be 8 bars which is 16 lines. Drop one and then comment on others. Be critical on their work so that they know if their flow goes or its a no. aiiight? OK GO HARD LET'S GOOO!!!!!

[Haspy]

I'll start it off wit what i wrote way back but still free...

I'm sprung til the morning like day 'n' nite
Toss n' turnin' stressin' out about the way of life
Contimplating with my heart just to let it go
Then I could flow towards a being, let me go n' see em'
But you can't compound to stick around for the girlfriend
A teddy bear to wrap round she wants to go down
Til the end of time armageddon I ain't ready for it
Snap the shackles on anckles cause I'm done with the shit
I want to be like Ali, nature flies like a butterfly
Sting like a bee but the bee sticks on honey
Bittersweet turns toxic, poisonous like tonic
Her antics dranks hypnotiq drunk love so ironic
Towards alcohol, sex, happiness is not the best
So I should suicide the conflict let the situation at rest.
I all I want in the end are my friends and then
I could be happier cause I need no girlfriend.

[jaz]

hasby wassup with the collab yo

[chris carbene]

G

[DMO]

www.youtube.com/scyvation We don't Freestyle We pay$tyle Remember Kids!

[DMO]

www.youtube.com/scyvation We don't Freestyle We pay$tyle Remember Kids!

[DMO]

www.youtube.com/scyvation We don't Freestyle We pay$tyle Remember Kids!

[roshane]

Lets goo niggo....

Yo man well it be like its 4 am in the morn`
Sittin back wondering what b next for tomorrow`
I dont know why you messing round me i aint soft and moshy
They dont let me play with the neighbours cuz im hard and pushy, pussy
Don't get outta line,// money on ma mind/ man i stay on the grind//
Im laying on the cake, im waiting to take, break , what a nigga, tryina make!
Man im real !, some niggaz just, layin and fake!...
Stuff and hit me and i push you way back, get me off the hook
and see the finatic lil wayne act
Test me man and get your career, thrown down the drain
Move as one, but fuck shit up and get ya member card, torn out the frame
When i come through they be like damn, cuz im stunttin like that
I dont make trouble, but start shit, and ill be sure to fight back
Ma niggaz we role deep , 2 in the frontseat and two in the back
Hit you wit the mac, rollin round the town with you in the back
Im a cool nigga,but diss me and get murdered on the track...Cut shit an crap man its a rap

=--Burry them gunz in the woods and back to tha hood--=

[Scane]

learn how to record!
http://raydavis-recordingmusic.blogspot.com/

[DMO]

www.youtube.com/scyvation We don't Freestyle We pay$tyle Remember Kids!

[B-Blaz3]

yo dis ass ma nigga step ya game up a lil i fuck wit some of the shit but switch it up a lil

[Derick Mc Neil]

I didn't even read ya whole rap, cuz ya 1st line's wack, do somethin better than tryin ta get on a track. Da name's DJca$h str8 outta Brockton Mass Southside,Somerset wit a glock and mask. Slang rocks 4 cash homie it ain't no stop'in me i make real doe u make it playin monopoly. So don't say shit if ya ass ain't livin it,niggaz ain't givin shit we keep it gangsta livin bitch. Da only thing we givin hollow tips threw ya fitted,label us ball playaz cuz dem balls we be pitchin.

[Quesyall]

i wasn't gonna do this but i think u should go back on the block and sell rocks
ya rap skills is weak my nigga i suggest you stop
how u dis the next man when ya shit sound like a 2 dollar hooker
and other words yo shit aint tight yeah thats right i said it and nigga what
you aint on the block you got ya head out the window while gettin fucked in the butt
now thats nasty just like the flow i be spittin'
nick named the runs cus dog i be shittin'
you like a flashlight in the day u aint never gone shine
talk that gangsta shit online get confronted and end up cryin
i only know two people that play with balls thats bitches and fags
since you don't act like a bitch then i guess you a fag
and stop callin out ya hook you making the real G's look bad
i would tell you to hell and kiss my ass but i just remember you a fag