Drop a VERSE!!!!!!! FREESTYLE 16 BARS LETS GO!!!!!

[Haspy]

You know whats the deal. Drop a freestyle verse about anything. It has to be 8 bars which is 16 lines. Drop one and then comment on others. Be critical on their work so that they know if their flow goes or its a no. aiiight? OK GO HARD LET'S GOOO!!!!!

[Haspy]

I'm a verse, just think man, it sounds so ridiculous,
A man turns sick, can't keep eyes off this, meticulous,
Its just so malicious that a threat popped up,
A virus scanned with the man, it was an H1N1 cuz
Sorry for the spread, had to share all the bread
Didn't know that you really cared, I'm just offerin', damn
People suffering out there, just stop being one,
Selfish mother fucker who dont give about another
Your significant other, slipped the money undercover
I only really wish it was your mother but was not your sister
Damn I really miss her, kisser on the dicker
Ride her all the time, left the bumper on the sticker
Flipsides to the dark side, light was too boring heh?
Calories to the diet i think shes wants more. heh?
Haha I'm just harder than my last verse
If it wasn't barter then the death is my last hearse

[Loco "Da '90s Baby"]

O YEA GOOD GOIN ON DA EDIT, THANKS TO ME, DA FIRST 1 TO NOTICE AND ACKNOWLEDGE DAT BULLSHIT U HAD BEFORE

[Jude]

I'm a verse, just think man, it sounds so ridiculous,
What sounds ridiculous is you tryna spit with this.
Come close to the sun and get burned like icarus.
And head back to earth quicker than Saint Nicolas.
I aint tryna diss with this. Wack or weak? Which is this?
Ill or meticulous? I'm iller than old syphillis.
Started the thread. And made one error.
Allowed the bad news bearer to give you terror.
The rules couldnt be fairer but your at a disadvantage.
The only way you could win is by challenging in spanish.
But probably still couldnt manage and still get the damage.
Try to turn savage and get the guilotine to your cabbage.
Haha I'm just harder than my last verse
Hahaha I dont know anyone that could rap worse.
And thats first you havent even heard my ass curse.
Put those wack written rhymes back in your dads purse.

[Haspy]

I'm, back for revenge, slashed few of your crew
Stabbed a knife through the throat, I'm iller than Jude
Don't be confused with the statement, its all fair man
Isn't blatant than throw it, easy bake, well done Sam.
I command to withstand controversial disadvantage
That the damage's outstanding, can't even comprehend it
I'd managed hable espanol aspire tan mi dick,
Punched a bitch to get down, so the same with my dick
I'm about to go AWOL, grenades AK's and napalm,
It's on, don't shit bricks or you'll LUVS and becalm
Yes, my bad habits, antics could be frantic,
Kid in a cabinet, I mean attic, balloon boy
He ain't a PIMP, but a Jude, here's a penny,
Minds a many, stick it there, in your swine jar Betty
I'm heavy, clog blood vessels, cholesterol maybe
You're light yogurt, ACTIVIA, your names a lady.

[Chri$tina]

DOPE!^^HASPY

[Jude]

You slashed a few of my crew. Ill admit that line got me board.
Because you couldnt slash shit even if you were right next to shift on the keyboard.
Speaking of slash. I come sharper than three swords.
And bring beef comets flaming hailed at your house like a meatloard.
Retard. Dont come Jude's alley, take a detour.
Your'e a lyrical midget. I'm Julius Peppers and Richard Seymour.
You iller than Jude? You ill and and confused. I spit realer than rules,
In knight duels, If you lose you lose your life and your bright jewels.
You challenging me in spanish is like raindrop battling a pool.
Im an ocean so waters water so your looking like the fool in spanish school.
I'll translate it. Comprehend it. And i still wont understand it.
Controversial disadvantage? You cant even withstand my rap commands bitch.
Youll just be nothing but faulty grenades and empty AK's
Your clogged blood vessels will put you on a yogurt diet for eighty-eight days.
Thanks for the penny. That was sweet even though now you dont have any.
It's okay. I can give you a twenty, because you know I have plenty.

[Young Kong]

watch u go bang with hot or cold i'll shock a show u with a stom of raps there clapping hard like stamped of elephants u might be trample but i might not care. rock stone 2 mother fucker ahh 5 4 boom its operation 450. lets go i'm here i'm here i'm here i's pimpi i'm so cool know me its kong aka heavie d my shit is killing it. its a 100 bar lets keep going i'm another born talent that better watch it. i'm on it like volter we gonna hit the sts with kong aprecitaion. my swag on a whole other lvl the chicks r drooling over my swag and rapping skills told bitch she fly naw i'm not mind gamer .

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[Deadlock]

yo you can call me the stabbenest, i aint havin this, you's the ass grabinest cats
im so ravenous
you just cant fathom this, im so blasphemous, spit so much acid all the cops be harassin us
askin us all type of dumb shit attackin us, backin us into the wall and smackin us
get mad and just dont say didily squat, they laugh at us and the shits gettin me hot
they say im too skinny too tall but when you ball, cats ride ya dick till the day that you fall
so you all move like you rented a u-haul
you told me that i suck now you talkin bout you raw
gettin blue balls on my way to utah, baby wouldnt fuck cause she said i was to small
but im G.Q they compare me to Jude Law, you a fuckin punk and you soft like ru-paul

[Jude]

Deadlock its a lock your dead on the spot.
Die in a hot box while I give you lyrical small pox.
So ravenous you sound like a rabid antonym of a philanthropist looking for an ass to kiss. I'm a verbal activist.
You could read haspy's diss and see you are about the fast black active fist.
And be so confused your probably gonna try to rap after this.
Police officers harassing you putting you against the law.
Reminding you that being wack is against the law.
You could do time but of course theyll drop the charges.
you'll plead retarded and end up picking up garbage.
Maybe you are tall but you need some more feet to be facing me.
The place will be filled with death as you kneel on your aching knees.
Basically, I'm able to give you death from A to Z.
I can probably even beat you lazily with two police officers tasing me.
Police officers harassing you putting you against the law.
Reminding you that being wack is against the law.
You suck whether not your in your hometown utah.
Be G.Q. and get compared to Jude Law because Jude Law and his mom knows Jude's raw.

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